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janecarnall (janecarnall) wrote,
@ 2009-07-12 16:14:00

Entry tags:

keptverse, mouth of the wolf, players

Hello! New confusion and new chapters...
Look at this way: you're having an adventure!

See, I had a problem with "End-Game", and it's mutated. A bit.

What I thought was going to be the last section of the Games story turned into the penultimate section. "End-Game" now has five parts and was posted in April.

"In the mouth of the wolf", the new last section of the Games story, started in May and now has five parts written, four posted, and two more planned. You have already read three out of the first four chapters posted. Sorry.

There are now posted: part one, part two, part three (this is the only brand-new part) and part four of "In the Mouth of the Wolf", the sixth and final section of this story. Part five is written and will be posted after review: parts six and seven are still under development, but I do not *touch wood* perceive any MORE course-changes. And the goal is to have it all posted by end-of-day 2nd August at the very latest, sanity permitting. Ideally, earlier.

However. "The Players", posted back in November, now has a new alternate version of Part One: Willow. At the moment, such is the way my mind works, both versions are hanging in a Schroedinger's Box, with identical reality. But you get to read them both because I didn't mean to keep you hanging this long for the rest of the Games story.

And as I say: I am resolved, to have it all finished for you by the time I leave for the Worldcon on 3rd August.

Links to all chapters here in The stories so far.

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	more is good. eileenlufkin 2009-07-13 02:01 am UTC (link)
	I'm glad this is moving again. Experimental Willow is all too plausible. I liked this bit; "Voices, downstairs, children who had been abused and children who had been abusers, arguing as if they were friends at school." I like how the minor characters to Richard and Sam keep acting like the leads in their own stories. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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janecarnall
2009-07-13 05:16 am UTC (link)

Experimental Willow is all too plausible.

Sadly, yes. But it is very odd to be doing the conjuring trick right out there where anyone can see me! Normally when I think there's a scene needed in the part already written, I could just palm a few cards and pop them in as necessary and no one has to know...

I liked this bit; "Voices, downstairs, children who had been abused and children who had been abusers, arguing as if they were friends at school."

Thank you. It's been quite an adventure writing Richard.

I like how the minor characters to Richard and Sam keep acting like the leads in their own stories.

Hee. They're just all a bunch of egotists. ;-)

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	grodwona.livejournal.com 2009-07-13 12:48 pm UTC (link)
	Wow! Great to see this moving again - Congratulations! I'm really waiting for the last bit and then I'm going to go through and read it all carefully right from the beginning. Another thing - I've got everyone else placed but who are the girls? It's just occurred to me that they must have a tv-counterpart like all the other characters. (Reply to this) (Thread)

janecarnall
2009-07-13 01:15 pm UTC (link)

Wow! Great to see this moving again - Congratulations! I'm really waiting for the last bit and then I'm going to go through and read it all carefully right from the beginning.

Whee!

Another thing - I've got everyone else placed but who are the girls? It's just occurred to me that they must have a tv-counterpart like all the other characters.

Heh. Oh yes, but pretty damn obscure. They're not a set of four, and they're all from *much younger* than they were when they were on screen. But I definitely should update the character list page with photos.

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